I would like to tell you something about Kathy. Kathy was born in Shanghai. She's been in Australia for 4 years. Now she is living Ashfield. She never worked in Australia because she want improving English and learning some skills. Therefore she chose the course
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I would like to tell you something about Kathy. Kathy was born in Shanghai. She's been in Australia for four years and now she is living in Ahsfield. She has never worked in Australia and because she wants to improve her English and learn some skills, she has chosen this course.
13 march 2008
Today I will have an assessment about bookkeeping, this is my first assessment in the course, so I have some
I am somewhat
nervous. However, I will try my best in the exam.
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Comments (10)
Rebecca said
at 9:03 am on Mar 6, 2008
I wonder where Kathy was born? Oh, it was Shanhai! I have visited Shangai - but many years ago when I was young and used to do alot of travelling.
Rebecca said
at 6:36 am on Mar 13, 2008
I also haven't spelt Shanghai correctly! Thankyou Jiz Xin. I have just added some linking words to make your sentences longer. Try and do this more often with your writing and it will become even more interesting.
jiaxin said
at 9:15 am on Mar 13, 2008
Hello, Rebecca I'm glad to you correct my english. Thank you.
tracy hinckson said
at 9:21 am on Mar 13, 2008
hi jia xin
just leaving you a note to say hello and wish you all the best for the exam today.
regards
tracy
nataliya said
at 9:35 am on Mar 13, 2008
Hello Jia Xin. How are you? I am very worried about test today. What about you? Are you redy for test?
Hello Jia Xin. How are you? I am very worried about the test today. What about you? Are you ready for the test? (Rebecca's corrections!)
kathy said
at 10:36 am on Mar 13, 2008
Hi Jia xin. Thank you for writing about me!
thomas said
at 8:50 am on Mar 20, 2008
hi,jiaxin.You are really nervous for last test? Today maybe we will know the result. How about this morning, have you sent your form to central link?
ivy said
at 10:21 am on Mar 27, 2008
hi kathy, i very enjoy to melbourne last week. but lost much money. e.g. air flight ticket, transport fee, etc.,
jiaxin said
at 10:36 am on Mar 27, 2008
Hi Jiaxin how are you today? did you enjoy watching the video today? I thought it was a good way to showcase some issues with cultural diversity.
ivy said
at 10:42 am on Mar 27, 2008
hi jiaxin, i don't understood part of the video. because
it spoke very fast. my english not very well. and sorry about the last two comment. i would send to kathy but send error to you.
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